It was about to rain as I waited for the bus. A woman came and sat next to me on the bench. She was about fifty and looked like a middle class housewife. She looked harried and lost as she rummaged through her old black bag. It looked like a letter that she folded and placed it into her coat pocket. An old rickety bus stopped and she hopped into it.
The bus moved away. I saw a piece of folded paper next to me. The woman must have left it behind. I reached out for the letter which was crumbled and looked tear stained. It read :
My dear Leena,
I think it’s about time we end this little episode of ours. I need to get back to my life and you to yours. It is better this way. Too many people could be hurt. What will society say? I will miss you sorely but keep you in my heart.
Goodbye.
My heart went out to her. She must be heading back to her loveless life and the rigmarole of being a housewife. There must be so many souls out there looking for love and happiness – at any given point of age and time.
Brief enough! With your description, I could almost see her! Nice!
Thanks. My first attempt at writing short fiction!
Very good! I liked it so much, I’m following you now!
I’m glad you do. Thanks for the follow and I’ll do the same.
Thank you!
I think you did a wonderful job!
Thanks TR.
I thought it was excellent and yes, brief enough.
Thanks for taking your time to read it.
very good!
Well done. Very enjoyable and empathetic.
brief and full of details at the same time.. keep on writing! I like it a lot!
Thanks for the feedback.
i like your post, short yet full of emotion especially on the letter 🙂
Thanks for reading and the feedback.
You my dear, are an incredible writer. You can’t imagine how many people just might relate to your fiction! 😉